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wouldn't you
our society so pierced by cliches
after all, aren't we the masters of our own happy ending to never-end
the desperate desire to be best
no tales, i know your soul lies with golden victory and plastic flowers
craving for goodbye before hello
remember, when those mind-breaking breaths were still significant
wouldn't you miss
- wouldn't you miss
our society so pierced by cliches
after all, aren't we the masters of our own happy ending to never-end
the desperate desire to be best
no tales, i know your soul lies with golden victory and plastic flowers
craving for goodbye before hello
remember, when those mind-breaking breaths were still significant
wouldn't you miss
- you,
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I love the line "I know your soul lies with golden victory and plastic flowers"
The word "whiffs" threw me, though. It distracted me enough to stop the beautiful flow. But I quickly came back.
All around, this poem is truly wonderful.
The word "whiffs" threw me, though. It distracted me enough to stop the beautiful flow. But I quickly came back.
All around, this poem is truly wonderful.